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  1. UnknownMay 13, 2018 at 5:05 PM

    Hi Tiffany! I think you have a great start to your final project. I found your introductory paragraph very intriguing - especially how you say women are very emotionally complex. This is such a great topic to explore, regardless of what time period we talk about, because I feel this is always an interesting thing to think about and explore. I also think its interesting how society, and particularly men, think women are so emotionally complex. I also like how you incorporate a quote into each paragraph and sort of explain it. Like you stated at the end that it's a rough draft, I'm looking forward to you adding more in depth writing to your project and see where that goes. Good luck!

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  2. Ceasar de la OMay 14, 2018 at 11:12 AM

    Howdy Tiffany!
    Your final project is coming along to a nice start. This is a tricky topic to do (this was my first project prompt and It took me awhile to get where I need to be), but I feel like you're on the right track. Your introduction is nicely done with an immediate plummeting into the overall ideas of your project about Women and more specifically Hedda Gabler. So far each body paragraph works and flows well, with the different perspectives of Gabler. Your incorporation of the various quotes you've selected are well integrated. I look forward to see how the accumulation of perspectives add up and how they coincide with your own as the project develops more. Nice work on your first draft and good luck with the last weeks of the semester.

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  3. UnknownMay 14, 2018 at 12:25 PM

    Hey Tiffany,
    I just finished up reading your final project submission and you did a great job!! I really enjoyed your writing. You did a great job organizing your project, with an opening paragraph that introduces your topic well, and each body paragraph afterwards having it’s own focus which contributes to the overall topic. Hedda Gabler was a very interesting character, so much so that they named the paly after her. I haven’t had time to go back and read anything after Act One but I was curious about how the story played out. Did you read the rest? Anyway, my only suggestion is to re-read your submission, as there are just a couple little grammar and typo errors.
    Great job overall! I look forward to reading your revisions and the rest of your thoughts!

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  4. UnknownMay 17, 2018 at 10:03 PM

    Hey Tiffany! I think you chose a great topic of Hedda Gabler to talk about in your projet. Your project submission was very interesting to read and I think your paragraphs were well structured. For each paragraph, you stayed on topic to what that paragraph was about and it was easy to follow along. Your introduction was nicely done. You started off with an attention grabber when you said "women are so emotionally complex that they do not understand themselves". It made me, and I'm sure it made others as well, want to continue reading your paper. Your thesis was clear in the first paragraph with the way you mentioned you were going to talk about how the author and other characters viewed Hedda Gabler. Anyways I think you did a wonderful job and I hope you have a wonderful rest of the semester with this last week's worth of work. Good job Tiffany!

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  5. UnknownMay 20, 2018 at 11:27 AM

    Hi Tiffany!
    You did a great job with your third project. I think you made a really great choice for topic and how you decided to talk about Hedda Gabler in your paper. You did a good job of making it clear the way you would break down your paper and what you would talk about with your introduction and following through with that in the rest of your paper. I think you did really well with using quotes from the play to really show the type of character Hedda is and using these quotes to back up the way you think the character was seen during the play. I noticed that at the end you said you had more to add, but I think everything you have is more than enough to really explain the way you saw Hedda Gabler in this play. Really great work on this project, this was a great last project!

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  6. UnknownMay 20, 2018 at 11:38 PM

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